CRITIQUE SESSION EXAMPLE
This section is provided as an actual example of how our critique group functions.
Oasis is a story by group member Paul Carlson, about two men who travel through
the Nevada Desert on fundraising mission for their church. On their next stop they
encounter an unusual and potentially serious situation.
This short story was first submitted for review and critique during the week preceeding Monday, 1/20/97. Several written critiques were sent to the author, and commented upon via email. The submission was then discussed during our "live" chat session. It was later rewritten with close attention to this input.
Read the Critiques and Chat log.
You can read the new, and hopefully improved, version here: Oasis2